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Beginner Track - Slartibartfas

Posted: Thu Feb 27, 2014 5:11 pm
by Slartibartfas
Hi guys

I started producing this year in january (psykovsky motivated me on sylvester :P)
So far, i made two tracks with ableton ....here is one of them :

https://soundcloud.com/jonas-massa/slar ... -1/s-nSgiw

i need some feedback :) :twisted:

Thank you for your support, this whole message board (especially "Music Production & Mixing" ) is really a great help

Re: Beginner Track - Slartibartfas

Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2014 2:05 am
by Plasma Force
this slayed my eardrum :P great work brotha

and big greetings from Canada :blush

Re: Beginner Track - Slartibartfas

Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2014 11:13 am
by dj_anubis
Welcome to TRIPLAG! :ura

Great to see new members here :drinks

1. Thank you for sharing
2. Just heard you track, let me help you embedding it to this forum



Just type: [souncloud]the full souncloud link[/souncdloud]

3. about the track, nice sounds you have there, but I think you need to add more stuff to make it more intresting, more sounds, more breaks, make your tracks with a lot of stuff going on so they will be more intresting, thats my opinion

Maybe if you will lower the volume of the bass it might help, because it really feels to me like the track is 85% kick & Bass

Keep on the good work, its clearly that you try to do twisted and crazy stuff, and you pretty much know what you are doing 8) so continue the hard work you will get there

4. Please choose nice avatar (you can do it throu the user control panel section

5. by the way it will be nice if you can tell us a bit about your work process vsts and fx that you like etc...

:partyman: :partyman: :partyman: :partyman:

Re: Beginner Track - Slartibartfas

Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2014 8:48 pm
by Slartibartfas
Thanks for the feedback :wink:

i will try to regard your tips

I use Sylenth (for bassline and synths), Bazzism (for kicks), Z3ta, Ablino, Superior Drummer and the Fabfilter collection right now! :)

Re: Beginner Track - Slartibartfas

Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2014 8:43 pm
by Slartibartfas
Here is an update of the track and the other one :





thanks for listening